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Old 02-17-2013, 03:49 PM   #1
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Default Leaflet Review

Wonder if anyone could glance over these leaflets im going to get printed in a6 on card.

Let me know of any mistakes or improvements i could make.


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obviously the watermarks will be removed before printing and the quallity and grey borders wont be there.

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Old 02-17-2013, 04:55 PM   #2
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If a pic or artwork is watermarked it is covered under the copyright laws and as such can not be used unless permission is aquired from the owner of the image.

The bottom card is too wordy. Take the testimonial out and add slice out of a map showing where you are. There's a trick to saying a lot in a few words. Stop and think about it.

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Old 02-20-2013, 11:20 AM   #3
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Be careful with words like "instant" because sometimes you just can't get to things and you don't want that coming back to bite you.
Don't take life too seriously -- no one gets out alive. Plus, who wants to arrive to the hereafter in pristine condition wearing a suit and tie?
I want to slide in sideways, worn out, used up, hair a mess, clothes tattered, & screaming, "Whooo! What a ride!"
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