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Old 05-21-2011, 06:17 AM   #1
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Hi I am starting a computer repair business, put together a quick website, it's just created with vistaprint I will look at creating my own html site in time.

Struggling to think of any more content I can add to it.

http://www.atx-computer-solutions.co.uk

any suggestions would be great thanks.
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Old 05-21-2011, 04:23 PM   #2
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good luck with your site / business

I would recommend you list on the left hand side what services you offer, for example

Virus Removal
Data Backup
Computer Upgrade
Computer Health Check

Then when they click on the service you can give info on what they will get
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Old 05-22-2011, 11:09 AM   #3
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Perhaps a bit more about you and perhaps a map of where you are based.
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Old 05-22-2011, 11:13 AM   #4
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too much text on your home page.

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Effectively reducing your text by 75%. No one likes to reed. We are lazy and stupid when we shop. It's your job to tell me what you do in a matter of 2 seconds before I get bored and leave your site.
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Perhaps a bit more about you and perhaps a map of where you are based.
Yeah, Put on there about your experiences and why people should hire you.

I also feel to much text, Most people wont read the text, I would recomend more pics
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Yeah, Put on there about your experiences and why people should hire you.

I also feel to much text, Most people wont read the text, I would recomend more pics
Something a bit more eye catching.
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Old 05-23-2011, 09:34 PM   #7
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Make sure you stick to your topic if your doing PC repair, you stray off of it, then it wont SEO.
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Old 05-23-2011, 10:25 PM   #8
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Hi I am starting a computer repair business, put together a quick website, it's just created with vistaprint I will look at creating my own html site in time.

Struggling to think of any more content I can add to it.

http://www.atx-computer-solutions.co.uk

any suggestions would be great thanks.
  • good job cutting down the text. Now increase the size of the photos and take out 50% more text.
  • also, make your pictures larger and more meaningful to your page.
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