Leaflet Review

[arsenalbates]

Wonder if anyone could glance over these leaflets im going to get printed in a6 on card.

Let me know of any mistakes or improvements i could make.

Thanks
Sam

---------- Post added at 08:49 PM ---------- Previous post was at 08:46 PM ----------

obviously the watermarks will be removed before printing and the quallity and grey borders wont be there.

 

[setishock]

If a pic or artwork is watermarked it is covered under the copyright laws and as such can not be used unless permission is aquired from the owner of the image.

The bottom card is too wordy. Take the testimonial out and add slice out of a map showing where you are. There's a trick to saying a lot in a few words. Stop and think about it.

 

[jmacavali]

Be careful with words like "instant" because sometimes you just can't get to things and you don't want that coming back to bite you.