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Old 10-14-2007, 11:27 PM   #1
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Default What do you guys think of this poem?

D-lew and I collaborated on it. Tell us what you think.

My deltoid and tricept bracii flexes.
Power rushing
From core to my forearm.
Improper pacing.
Way too tired already.
Doesn't matter now.
I straighten my arm.
I extend my weapon.
Lip bleeding into my mouth.
Metalic taste.
Doesn't matter now.
Sweat on my brow.
Small droplets on the tip of my tongue.
Vastus lateralis and Vastus medialis both flex.
Leg extends.
I feel it spraining.
Doesn't matter now.
Wrist turns just right.
Arm relaxes just in time.
Impact is jarring.
My epee breaks.
Doesn't matter now.
Green light goes on.
150 people roar.
The medal is mine.
This is what matters.
This is Sparta.
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Old 10-14-2007, 11:31 PM   #2
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This poem is full of win.
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Old 10-15-2007, 12:58 AM   #3
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It is full of win. The muscle names don't flow too well IMO, but great poem, better than what I could ever come up with in my life.
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Old 10-15-2007, 01:12 AM   #4
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For those who care, the only contribution I made was the last line.
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Old 10-15-2007, 01:13 AM   #5
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NOOO! you posted , you had 1337 posts , nice poem though, but look at a quote i made up in the chit chat thread
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