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Old 11-06-2007, 11:01 PM   #1
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Okay, I made a new resume and would like input on it


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Old 11-06-2007, 11:09 PM   #2
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It is good, but I feel like it could do with a bit of work.

1. What is this resume for?
2. You speak a bit too familiarly for my liking. When I wrote my resume, I was much more distant.
3. Write more about interests, put something unique there.

I can't really write a lot today, but I will get back to you tomorrow with a better list.
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Old 11-06-2007, 11:10 PM   #3
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This resume is for applying for computer oriented jobs, the only kinda job I like
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Old 11-06-2007, 11:19 PM   #4
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too long did not read....
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Old 11-06-2007, 11:21 PM   #5
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Then you need some reading lessons little bro. That was actually really short. Please don't make comments like those.
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Old 11-06-2007, 11:28 PM   #6
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Then you need some reading lessons little bro. That was actually really short. Please don't make comments like those.
o lol that is pretty short sorry about my other post (quote from collegehumor no harm intended)

it could go a bit more into detail in your intrests but overall it looks fine
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Old 11-06-2007, 11:31 PM   #7
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yes a very short resume for how much stuff he has done. short and to the point, thats how i like it.

under skills you wrote this
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-Setup and ran network of 25+ Mac’s in a server / client environment
where were the servers and what were they used for? thats one thing i noticed about it.
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-Very punctual, honest, reliable and good with people.
maybe go into a bit more detail here, your honest because...you never tell lies? tell it like it is? never do anything bad? i think you get my point, those terms are vague and can be interepurted in different ways. i dont know which of the interperatatious you are so i can offer suggestions.
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too long. put it on one page. pretty good, but put server 2003, not just 2003.
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Old 11-06-2007, 11:35 PM   #9
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again, it is a shorty. my mom's was 3 or 4 pages long and it was to the point as well
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I'll take a look at it tonight for you. You don't want a book for a resume you want something that catch's there attention and highlight your skills. When I do a resume I normally customize it for each job i'm applying for. That way they see the skills required for that job without having to read a book. No sense putting up a skill not required for the job your applying for since it takes up space and makes them read more. Its just like doing a search online for something use good keywords that capture there attention.
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