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Old 05-08-2006, 10:02 PM   #1
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Default The Original Lyric Thread...

I thought it would be nice for people to share songs that they've written (if they wish).

I'll start... This is about song 35/42. One of my favourites.
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What Will Become?
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It seems like this world is nothing like it used to be
And all the things I thought I knew have been taken away from me
Maybe this is why everyone is changing right before my eyes
And maybe it has something to do with me and how I feel inside

So many questions as to what makes us who we are today
Not enough answers to show from a world full of anguish and pain
So many confessions that we all have hidden away
What will become of those that remain?

What ever happened to the place that we once called home
It's all about the quest for power and by taking control
All it does is leave you with an empty and vacuous soul
Sucking the life out of you, turning your heart to stone

It seems like everyone is moving forward in everyway
While I'm making two steps back, much to my dismay
Looking back on the past, I wish that I did things differently
As I wonder how long this will last, is there anything left in me?

So many questions as to what makes us who we are today
Not enough answers to show from a world full of anguish and pain
So many confessions that we all have hidden away
What will become of those that remain?

Walls are closing in on me and there is no escape
These feelings that I have of confusion and delusion, I wish I could erase
And the harder I try to fight against this frustration that I hold inside
The more I feel like I'm walking a dead end road down the path of time

It seems like everyone else are the ones who make sense
And I'm just the one who watches from the picket fence
If only we could find the courage and strength to unify
Maybe then we would understand what we signify

So many questions as to what makes us who we are today
Not enough answers to show from a world full of anguish and pain
So many confessions that we all have hidden away
What will become of those that remain?

In times of the present, we must never forget that there is always hope
There may be terrorism and wars, hate and greed, lies and deceit
But there is always one thing that we have against those who want us to choke
And that is the strength to carry on, we will never banish our beliefs
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Please comment.

PS: I can't remember if I already made a thread about this, I don't think so cause' I did a search and found nothing.
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Old 05-08-2006, 10:06 PM   #2
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Default Re: The Original Songs Thread...

Got it cleared up..
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Default Re: The Original Songs Thread...

Well, cause' I only have lyrics at the moment... Lyrics arn't pointless anyway. In my opinion they're the most importnat part of a song.

Probably should of said that in the title, but oh well. Still, anyone else can upload their stuff (lyrics or full song) if they want.
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Default Re: The Original Lyric Thread...

Changed. Hope I did it right. Tell me what you want and its done.
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Default Re: The Original Lyric Thread...

Yeah, thanks man.

Did you like my song?
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Old 05-09-2006, 02:25 AM   #6
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Default Re: The Original Songs Thread...

I reallly like it, Its good
Thanks for share'n,
Seem around here not everyone just has computers that they excell at lucky~!!

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Well, cause' I only have lyrics at the moment... Lyrics arn't pointless anyway. In my opinion they're the most importnat part of a song.

Probably should of said that in the title, but oh well. Still, anyone else can upload their stuff (lyrics or full song) if they want.
Of couse lyrics arent pointless! Its part of the song and the structure and of it all...of couse...lol

Be lucky(well dont be :S), dont usally share my stuff like this
Its crappy and yeah but heres one of my fav's that ive done
Its got no title yet and i still got alot of work on it but here it is..


You are the worst kind of horrid person in a mask.disguise,
You think you fool everyone
But you don’t fool me,
I see right through your lies,
I see right thought your twisted real meanings
Your true plans,
People like you are easy for me to unfold,
Its just makes it more of a amusement for me to find out so quick,
You think you had everyone fooled right from the start,
Not me, didn’t take that long really,
In no time you will ____ and uncover your real lies and self,
The misery you can cover up,
I will break down,
I will break you
Like you broke others,
See how you like it then,
You will get it 10 fold,
See how bad it feels on you,
That it does me,
That it does everyone else,
Hope you have had a ____ great time(Lying..Fooling…Hurting…Destroying )


C < by Me
Its not finished of couse..
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Nice GG, and yes I do consider myself lucky .

I look forward to the finished profuct.

Anyone else want to contribute... come on. Don't be shy
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Yeah, thanks man.

Did you like my song?
Yeah, it was good
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