The Orb of Light, by Kalthorn

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I don't generally like to advertise on Forums, but I like all of the people on here so I'm going to do it. We have discussed many things between us, and I know it is a Computer Forum (eg. ComputerForums): but I need opinions and you lot have enough to share out!

I have been writing a story - and there is no light at the end of the tunnel as to its ending, although I already know the ending, just not how many pages it will be (at the moment its 41) how many words it will be (at the moment its 19,000) or indeed how long it will take me.

I would like your opinions, even and especially my favourite Linux-Man, who is well taught in Linux-Lore and in the actions of the Linux-Folk.


Chapter One - A Day in the Library
Chapter Two - The Guild of Extra-Dimensional Peacekeepers
Chapter Three - The Dungeons of Dol Pferct
Please post opinions, however useless they may be, to me they will all be invaluable!​
 
Cool, I really need opinions on it - I've been doing it for so long all my school friends are totally bored of it and will never read it unless its finished!
 
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