Well, apparently, they don't like what I wrote as a sonnet. Anyway, tell me what you think. I actually found it pretty amusing they did call me about it.
The World That Threw Me Away
There's nothing left in this world for me
Death seeks me today
Or maybe it's just because I see life as a bully
Death speaks the words that I can't say
Feeling as this world threw me away
I feel death crawling on my skin
Throwing my life around insanely
Whispering words that'll death will make me okay
But I won't just end my life
I will break the grasp death has me
Making me appear as a lowlife
I won't listen and maybe it will delay
As long as I can breathe and I can see
I still have life in me
That dosent seem suicidal to me , i get the idea of someone not willing to give up by the fact that the end 6 lines
And you think thats disturbing we had to study this at high school for english
Today I am going to kill something. Anything.
I have had enough of being ignored and today
I am going to play God. It is an ordinary day,
a sort of grey with boredom stirring in the streets.
I squash a fly against the window with my thumb.
We did that at school. Shakespeare. It was in
another language and now the fly is in another language.
I breathe out talent on the glass to write my name.
I am a genius. I could be anything at all, with half
the chance. But today I am going to change the world.
Something's world. The cat avoids me. The cat
knows I am a genius, and has hidden itself.
I pour the goldfish down the bog. I pull the chain.
I see that it is good. The budgie is panicking.
Once a fortnight, I walk the two miles into town
for signing on. They don't appreciate my autograph.
There is nothing left to kill. I dial the radio
and tell the man he's talking to a superstar.
He cuts me off. I get our bread-knife and go out.
The pavements glitter suddenly. I touch your arm.
right, if it wasn't for the last few lines then it could be cause for alarm. Although, i once had a g/f who happened to let me read some of her poems and it had to be some of the most f***ed shit i had ever read. They were all written before we were together but needless to say, i still left that one behind in a hurry.