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Old 10-16-2007, 09:46 PM   #1
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Default My school called about the poem I wrote

Well, apparently, they don't like what I wrote as a sonnet. Anyway, tell me what you think. I actually found it pretty amusing they did call me about it.

The World That Threw Me Away

Thereís nothing left in this world for me
Death seeks me today
Or maybe itís just because I see life as a bully
Death speaks the words that I canít say

Feeling as this world threw me away
I feel death crawling on my skin
Throwing my life around insanely
Whispering words thatíll death will make me okay

But I wonít just end my life
I will break the grasp death has me
Making me appear as a lowlife
I wonít listen and maybe it will delay

As long as I can breathe and I can see
I still have life in me
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Old 10-16-2007, 09:50 PM   #2
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Aha why did they call about that... I had to write about some thing bad I have done, I wrote about how I f**ked up some kid that was trying to steal my bike and the teacher never said anything.
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Old 10-16-2007, 09:51 PM   #3
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It's strongly suicidal. And I can see why they were worried about you after reading this poem.
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Old 10-16-2007, 09:58 PM   #4
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Aha why did they call about that... I had to write about some thing bad I have done, I wrote about how I f**ked up some kid that was trying to steal my bike and the teacher never said anything.
LMAO.
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It was not the suicidal undertones that bothered them but the possibility that you might be EMO. That is why they called.
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Old 10-16-2007, 11:14 PM   #6
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Default Re: My school called about the poem I wrote

My english teacher would have thought it was amazing.
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Old 10-16-2007, 11:23 PM   #7
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I am really not surprised over this.
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Old 10-16-2007, 11:32 PM   #8
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It was not the suicidal undertones that bothered them but the possibility that you might be EMO. That is why they called.
Lmao, I'm not emo. Very far from it. Actually i got the idea from marilyn manson's coma white, and then just added some stuff.
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Old 10-16-2007, 11:33 PM   #9
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what did they say when they called
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what did they say when they called
They wanted to touch base and see how I'm doing. Apparently, not well, by their standards. lol.
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