If it's coursework, I wouldnt post it online untill you've recieved your results - they run bot'z throught he interwebs and they might think it to be suspicious if they saw your work online! I will read it propperly once i've finished writing my comparitive poetry essay
Think this is the first i've plundered the more creative/sinister side of my writing. Plus it's a subject i'm interested in. (i hope the john lennon references are clear enough)
Thanks for everyones comments. I'll be pulling it off now. I'm going to bed