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Old 11-27-2006, 12:36 PM   #1
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http://download.yousendit.com/2E0391B7753CB7F1

1 page report, I am not allowed to make it any longer.

It is on Angel Island, the ellis island of the west basically.

Do you like it? Is it good? Did I write too much about some stuff and not enough about other things?

Thanks guys.
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Old 11-27-2006, 12:56 PM   #2
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what are the techers requirements?
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Old 11-27-2006, 05:12 PM   #3
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1 page long, and um...

about angel island...

i have it written down on a piece of paper...at school...

I think one of the things was why they wanted to come to america...sorry i really can't help you...help you help me...so i can't help myself.

ok i got it, something about illegal and legal immigrating, why they wanted to come to america, what they had to do to get into the country...um i think that is it.
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