I'm going to be honest. I barely watched it. It's a little dull. We just hear you talk (I'm assuming you made this). Try to get some variety. Get an introduction...with a touchy song. Add some pictures. Talk during the pictures and put a song when you show the slides. That way it won't overload the brain with information and persuasion.
I'm going to be honest. I barely watched it. It's a little dull. We just hear you talk (I'm assuming you made this). Try to get some variety. Get an introduction...with a touchy song. Add some pictures. Talk during the pictures and put a song when you show the slides. That way it won't overload the brain with information and persuasion.
Pics? People who really watch this and understand what he's trying to say don't want pretty photos, they want the graphs and the information that he provided.
I actually found the music slightly annoying, I think it should be removed with perhaps a small piece at the introduction.