My school called about the poem I wrote

[BF2player]

Well, apparently, they don't like what I wrote as a sonnet. Anyway, tell me what you think. I actually found it pretty amusing they did call me about it.

The World That Threw Me Away

There's nothing left in this world for me
Death seeks me today
Or maybe it's just because I see life as a bully
Death speaks the words that I can't say

Feeling as this world threw me away
I feel death crawling on my skin
Throwing my life around insanely
Whispering words that'll death will make me okay

But I won't just end my life
I will break the grasp death has me
Making me appear as a lowlife
I won't listen and maybe it will delay

As long as I can breathe and I can see
I still have life in me

 

[Juice1]

Aha why did they call about that... I had to write about some thing bad I have done, I wrote about how I f**ked up some kid that was trying to steal my bike and the teacher never said anything.

 

[hascet]

It's strongly suicidal. And I can see why they were worried about you after reading this poem.

 

[BF2player]

Aha why did they call about that... I had to write about some thing bad I have done, I wrote about how I f**ked up some kid that was trying to steal my bike and the teacher never said anything.

LMAO.

 

[Ð88]

It was not the suicidal undertones that bothered them but the possibility that you might be EMO. That is why they called.

 

[Cabbs]

My english teacher would have thought it was amazing.

 

[MikeReiner]

I am really not surprised over this.

 

[BF2player]

It was not the suicidal undertones that bothered them but the possibility that you might be EMO. That is why they called.

Lmao, I'm not emo. Very far from it. Actually i got the idea from marilyn manson's coma white, and then just added some stuff.

 

[borat_sagdiyev]

what did they say when they called

 

[BF2player]

what did they say when they called

They wanted to touch base and see how I'm doing. Apparently, not well, by their standards. lol.